Style in the Social Sciences
(from Traditions and Adaptations: Writing in the Disciplines,
Dean Ward, pp.151-160)
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Nouns
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Vague, general nouns are used as it is difficult to
identify the agents or causes
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Example: The majority of men in the workplace discriminate...
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Example: Various social forces cause
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Often, the passive voice is used to avoid identifying the agent
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Use more technical words to express everyday concepts (jargon)
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Example: artifactual variance
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Example: Overtime response instability
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Pronouns
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Generally prefer "I" and "we"
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Gives a sense of community with other social scientists (use of "we")
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I creates a sense of the person talking to his or her collages
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creates a strong voice
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"We" is preferred to "I" since it gives a greater sense of community.
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Third person is used when the writer wants to sound "scientific"
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The Social Sciences do not have a shared body of knowledge so it is necessary
to identify themselves with their work more directly than someone in the
Natural Sciences would. At the same time, social scientists want to sound
"scientific."
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Verbs
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Tense
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What did author did in the past - past tense
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Claims are made in the present tense
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Example: In this study, we demonstrate
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Published work of individuals is either in the past perfect or past tense
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Example: Hayes has shown ...
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Example: Hayes showed ...
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Voice
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Passives are used to call more attention to the subject rather than the
author
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Passives are used to indicate that the agent is not known (See
Nouns)
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Example: Women are discriminated against. (by whom?)
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Passives are used to present objective impersonal facts.
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Modifiers
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Use to admit uncertainty (this occurs more frequently in the Social Sciences
than it does in the Natural Sciences. In the Natural Sciences, these would
not be as accepted.)
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Example: The results of our study may possibly provide bases for
other work on ...
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Example: The structure observed may be like ...
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Example: The study attempted to measure ...
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Example: But, as we contend, people typically ...
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Create a tone of confidence
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Example: The structure is ...
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Example: We argue that ...
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Example: We propose ...
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Diction
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Social Scientists use more jargon
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Example: The data on which this study is based were gathered in the course
of a study of the genesis of identification with an occupation in
students doing graduate work in physiology, philosophy and mechanical engineering.
(Translation: We studied graduate students in physiology, philosophy and
mechanical engineering to see how they began to identify with their jobs.)
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The more established you become, the less you need to rely on jargon.
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When you are starting out, you need to use more jargon to show that you
know the "in" language.
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Tone
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Use "I-was-there-persona" - "I" to report on what you observed.
Some observations. There is a tension in social science writing. On one
hand, there is a need to establish authority in the writing. On the other
hand, there is a need to sound like one of the community of social scientists.
This is due, in part, to the lack of shared accepted knowledge (at least
according to Ward). In the Natural Sciences, there are facts that all people
agree on and can make reference to. Therefore, there is little need to
convince the reader of the background information. However, in the Social
Sciences, there is a need to establish even your starting points. The best
way to get an understanding of the style is to look at material written
by Social Scientists.